Shadow Kumori

okay i am not an admin but i have to say something, at least as a mod. I dont remember you ever asking anyone if you can be a genetically altered demon animal. Dont misunderstand, sorry if I sound like i'm being mean, I'm not. I'm just saying you have to get permission for that sort of thing =/

I know i asked and they said that konton has last say

yea and i thought baikou disapproved of that and too tell you the truth dude if i know kon he will disapprove of it because it seems god modish

all the animal form dus it mack the user faster or stronger and mack them look like a demon like animal thats all

oh, well thats not really that bad =/ still i guess it all matters on an administraters opinion

I'm going to have to disapprove. Maybe this can happen to your character in the plot (doubtfully) But in all honesty if you get this it will lead to new members thinking its something you can start out with and lead to god moding issues in the future. Sorry.

ok i know what if it was a jutsu that only can be taught by one who knows it ?

like a full wolf transformation?

no, more like hafe wolf

In all honesty I don't like the idea.
But, I have no reason to deny.
When baikou get on message him and dicuss it.
There is nothing godmodish about a transformation and speed boost if distibuted carefully.
I'm just not to fond of it. So instead of being biased get his opinion.

ok but besides that is everthing else ok

yeah besides that it looks fine.

ok cool

I'd say No. You can have heightened agility and strength, but wolf transformation just seems to "Twilight-ish"

NO Twilight like! it is much diffrent, i have a pic

Spoiler:

Make the jutsu - give me some time to think. I'd suggest using the jutsu once per day, and at night as it's restrictions.

ok i can work with that

NEW!

Character Name: Shadow Kumori

Desired Bloodline: Kumori

Desired Starting elements: Shadow, Lighting, Wind.

Desired Village: West empire.

Age: 23

Desired Rank: Jounin.

Appearance: Pic.

Personality: Shadow is a come and kind person but was ones a verey cruel, blood thirsty warrior from the war but now he has become a good fun loveing person.

Background information: Shadow was born during the war and was trained to survive no matter what, he was part of a teem of new type of ninja that have been genetically altered so they can turn in to demon like animals that where like robots and that killed with out hesitation but most went insane and where killed by there own but shadow was trained so that he can us his animal form with out going insane but he was just as cruel as they all were but he dident kill his opponent he shredded them to pieces giveing him the nickname the crimson blade demon but one day he was saved by a enemy nin after being deadly wounded and the nin told him "there is more ways to win a war then just slaughtering your enemy" from that day he has never kill his opponent's, now and days he works right under the Kumori clan leader and teaches new genin.

Special: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu.

Rp Sample: {Im to lazy to do this}

Two problems with this.
1 Shadow is not a chakra you may replace it.
2 in order to have a high rank a rp sample is required. That's the rules.

background has to be longer as well.

4)

Spoiler:

- that's a really long frickin' sentence. You might want to try using some periods and/or commas in there.


...Actually Chris, it said 7 lines, and that's pretty much 7 lines.