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Kinai Uchiha Uchiha
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| Subject: Kinais jutsus need to be approved Sat May 01, 2010 10:56 pm | |
| (Not finished but accept or deny ones up already) Name of Jutsu: Crimson Palm Rank: B-Rank Element: Fire Description: Similar to ameratsu but instead of black fire it is regular fire and also similar to chidori but fire. The user channels fire chakara into his palms causing his hand to ignite and he charges at the enemy at high speeds giving him tunnel vision so it is easy to counter unless a uchiha uses this because of his sharingan Name Of Jutsu: Infernal Flare Rank: C-rank Element: Fire Description: The user fires a small shining ball of intense heat straight into the air that can signal a squad or temporarily blind the opponent Name Of Jutsu: Spirit Of The Phoenix Rank: S-Rank Element: Fire Description: The user is engulfed in intense yellow-white fire that is super nova hot and can be used as offense or defence. While inactive the user's fire jutsus are slightly enhanced, and this jutsu lasts for 2-3 posts depending on rank and ability to control that element | |
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Chris Toushiro Toushiro
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| Subject: Re: Kinais jutsus need to be approved Sat May 01, 2010 11:00 pm | |
| Approved but im not so sure about the last jutsu, Super nova hot is a little uuuh. Too hot? super nova hot would destroy the earth -.- | |
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Konton Kumori
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| Subject: Re: Kinais jutsus need to be approved Sat May 01, 2010 11:00 pm | |
| Spirit Of The Phoenix Crimson Palm Disapproved unless said otherwise
Infernal Flare Approved unless said otherwise.
Warning you have submitted your three jutsu no edits or new jutsu can be posted until may 2 2010. | |
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Chris Toushiro Toushiro
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| Subject: Re: Kinais jutsus need to be approved Sat May 01, 2010 11:03 pm | |
| well thats 1/2 approved 1/2 dissaproved the judgement from another admin decides the decision | |
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Konton Kumori
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| Subject: Re: Kinais jutsus need to be approved Sat May 01, 2010 11:10 pm | |
| let me try and pursued you since Raiga will be absent for a few days. No offense Kinai but the Crimson palm was to vague. Like ameratsu is what bother me with this one. Ameratsu is suppose to be able to burn anything and never goes out. If the jutsu is like ameratsu it would be godmodding and or burn of the users hand far before it could be used, think about it.
Spirit Of The Phoenix not matter which way you look at this jutsu, it if ever able to be used in my opinion would require the mangekyou. Thats just by going off the sheer heat of the jutsu. Once the offensive and defensive is added along with the fire jutsu increase it would be one epic godmod. It would burn up the whole area and everyone in it with out touching them anyways if it was super nova hot.
But whether or not chris changes his mind.
Infernal Flare has been accepted. | |
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Chris Toushiro Toushiro
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| Subject: Re: Kinais jutsus need to be approved Sat May 01, 2010 11:24 pm | |
| well you do feel strongly about this but like the chidori, It doesn't electricute your hand even when you use it but I can see your point when you meant it was to vague | |
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Konton Kumori
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| Subject: Re: Kinais jutsus need to be approved Sat May 01, 2010 11:29 pm | |
| Also something as strong as ameratsu has to have restrictions if it is like the jutsu there is no way I'd let it be approved just for the sheer fact it can burn ANYTHING. | |
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Kinai Uchiha Uchiha
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| Subject: Re: Kinais jutsus need to be approved Sat May 08, 2010 6:10 pm | |
| no the crimson palm i am saying resembles ameratsu they are similar like flame covers the hand not like in power or anything | |
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